Friday, April 24, 2009

The Story Writtin On My Arm Comments

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As I sit in an empty room my thoughts are so tempting
I pick up the razor and the pen not sure what to do
Should I write this story of sorrow and heart break on my arm or on a paper?
I’m thinking to myself how could you do this to yourself
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Beautiful Disaster
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I love it! It's definitley a subject most would shy away from writing about, but you have done a fine job. I applaude you for the honesty and emotion you have put into this poem. It's simply amazing. Izzey Strange

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'Cuz I know how it feels to want to die /How it hurts to smile and you just want to give up'. I know exactly how that is too. It's the worst feeling in the world, and I'm sorry you've had to feel it. I lost my gf, whom I loved, and it sucked. This poem is so powerful, and I can relate so much.

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Sayz LFlynn 02 November 2009

a very well writen poem, 'you hurt yourself on the outside to try to kill the things on the inside'.. brilliant! 10 +++

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