Sunday, September 19, 2021

The Story Of Your Journey Comments

Rating: 4.6

Wait until God is finished
Faith is not just a side-dish
And there's no clear finish line
To let you know you've arrived.
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Susan Williams
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 June 2022

Faith is so precisely defined. Thoughtfully expressed.

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Richard Wlodarski 16 May 2022

Susan, when I was 23 years old, God had let me know that my story had not ended. I'm 70 now... and the story continues to get better every day! ay

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" The fact is that life is the story Of your journey with God." wonderful observation. Comes from the bottom of the heart of the poet, sure. Deft expression makes it truly Susanic.

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Smoky Hoss 27 March 2022

We're all participants, willing or otherwise, in the 'dream' of God; a dream that in the final analysis is Justice for all.

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Smoky Hoss 29 December 2021

Patience is the bridge of wisdom connecting us with God. Wonderful poem.

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 October 2021

I can relate to this beautiful poem.

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

part1/ A beautiful and light-shade spiritual poem that makes us think outside of ourselves and look at the universe and beyond.

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

part2/ Thank you for your poetic talents and your contact with us through this privileged website, I am happy to read your poems after a long absence, Susan does not stop as rivers

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

The fact is that life is the story Of your journey with God. He will let you know When your story has ended.

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Rebecca Navarre 27 September 2021

Hold onto faith, be patient in God, he will walk with us through each journey and each step! .. A very beautiful poem of heart and faith! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Solomon Terlumun Tule 23 September 2021

...Life is the story of your journey with God... Great thought

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 September 2021

Your words in all poems are my pleasure, a greatest treasure to read. Absolute fascinating poem, so very enjoyed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 September 2021

The last four lines say it all: absolutely our life is the story of OUR journey WITH God. Gorgeous honest poem, He will let us know when our story has ended. Powerful words! 5 Stars full on Top!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 September 2021

A spiritual poem crafted succinctly and conveyed brilliantly. Straightforward and thought provoking. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 September 2021

A powerful spiritual write on life and death and the power of God as a giver of life and after life.

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Bharati Nayak 20 September 2021

It is so nice to see you back with your poems.Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 20 September 2021

The fact is that life is the story Of your journey with God. He will let you know When your story has ended.----It is always a pleasure to read your poems dear Susan Williams.

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Bharati---I seem to have wandered off for quite a spell and missed reading your comment on this poem until now some eight or nine months later. I humbly apologize. I have been so buried in editing the Book one in my series that I should be tossed

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Anjandev Roy 20 September 2021

Glorious piece......like it......thanks for sharing....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 September 2021

Great to see you and yr work

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