Monday, October 3, 2011

The Story Of Us **3** Comments

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God grant me a moment that changed my life
Along with yours when victory came at last
I never gave you up, now I get what I want
A picture of you and I together came to life
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diana rose tolentino
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Ency Bearis 04 October 2011

Nice ending, well crafted thought. Lovely.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 October 2011

hay, i overlooked your 3rd. oh so this is the next chapter of the story it is happy ending after all amazing i am happy you see, if bad things happend already no more sadness to come for they have been experienced ahead HAPPY ENDING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 03 October 2011

It's a nice poem... Great expressions of feelings

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diana rose tolentino

diana rose tolentino

nueva ecija, philippines
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