Monday, October 3, 2011

The Story Of Us **2** Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through the distance I thought I’d heal
Looking at the horizon surrounded by seas
Water and skies, endless boundaries
I kept on staring as far as I can see.
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diana rose tolentino
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Ency Bearis 04 October 2011

Poignant, well expressed cogitations deep from your heart, great write, deserves a rate of 10 from me.

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 October 2011

Sad story..full of emotion..nice composition making me scan for the 1st part thanks for sharing...you have successful touch every reader's mind and heart.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 03 October 2011

ouch a very sad story a long poem complete on its own i saw the journey and i saw the pain i understood what you felt when he treated you coldly and i know too what is the feeling of continuously loving someone who fell out of love with you pero ang galing mo dito hhhmmmm you have so much more to give

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diana rose tolentino

diana rose tolentino

nueva ecija, philippines
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