Through the distance I thought I’d heal
Looking at the horizon surrounded by seas
Water and skies, endless boundaries
I kept on staring as far as I can see.
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Sad story..full of emotion..nice composition making me scan for the 1st part thanks for sharing...you have successful touch every reader's mind and heart.
ouch a very sad story a long poem complete on its own i saw the journey and i saw the pain i understood what you felt when he treated you coldly and i know too what is the feeling of continuously loving someone who fell out of love with you pero ang galing mo dito hhhmmmm you have so much more to give
Poignant, well expressed cogitations deep from your heart, great write, deserves a rate of 10 from me.