Tuesday, July 5, 2016

The Story Of Us Comments

Rating: 3.3

On my way to college, the lighthouse, the shore
The pretty cute buildings, I don't see them no more
In a beautiful town my mind is absent
The flowers tell summer, such a sweet scent
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Julie Smith
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Khairul Ahsan 23 May 2018

Like Tom Billsborough, neither have I heard Taylor Swift's song, but I liked your poem all the way. Particularly the last stanza touched me. I'll look for the song in YouTube now.

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Tom Billsborough 12 December 2016

Well written, Julie. I haven't heard Taylor's song. Must catch up on it.

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