Thursday, August 11, 2011

The Story Of The Half Awakened Girl Comments

Rating: 3.3

She spent her time sleeping
Playing singing and chatting
With friends about everything
But nothing was important, nonsense
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YOSRA BAIDI
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Hamida 10 January 2018

I liked this poem. Bear in mind stylistics. I think if you used the absurd style.

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 12 January 2012

your narrative poetry is beautiful. simple with deep goals the thing i liked and was wondered about is that you did not mention her fate which is well-known to all. (9)

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