The Story Of Sweat Comments

This is a lovely piece of work.

Very nice work here, i very much enjoyed it.

SO CUTE. I like this one.

the must important thing is that you r connected with the life - as we baked in our community and life there is the beat of your own keep up

ok, i just read your ph bio. so you write in one language and translate to english. i'm glad i don't have to try that. i would try to help you with english but it is more than i have time for now. besides, it would not be easy if i don't understand the meaning of the poem readily. :)

SORRY! i read the first few comments and the poem of course, but i don't understand. it is not my cup of tea. but, thanks for sharing. :)

An excellent poem and very well written. One can only imagine the drops of water just glistening like pearls on a workers face. Through all of this their sweat bears beautiful fruits of love that feeds a family, community and ultimately the hands strength to go even further. Very good.

That is awesome, very well told.

I like your idea of the way a simple act of love in poverty can rise to the skies to become divine and the emergence of the bride in white confirms the transformation.Good poem.

I love your style. This poem has so much to offer the reader. What wonderful tribute to the hard worker! 10++

Behind the sweat there is so many stories, with the will to survive, greatness can happen to everyone. Beautiful write!

A truly wonderful piece of work. Loved it.

nicely written and very poetic imagination...

an oracle of state of the mind, resemble into reality of lines within your poem...such poetic venture quest the realm of challenges and truth of human journey of Life....Excellent master piece....a 10/10

God bless you...your heart is so pure dear adheez, i really love this work because of it's pure honesty and the truth that this sweats will be really sweet for their family who are looking forward the financials and the supporting.. well done

Beautiful description on life of worker.. Loved reading it.

Labour for life for most is the only way, and a full and happy life.

Beautiful description of hard lives of labors..great job,

a nice poetic piece wonderfully written

A nice poetic thread recognizing the value of people's efforts in life. Poets truly know what it really means! Keep up your writing.