The Story Of Sweat Poem by adheez van der beanthz

SORRY! i read the first few comments and the poem of course, but i don't understand. it is not my cup of tea. but, thanks for sharing. :)

An excellent poem and very well written. One can only imagine the drops of water just glistening like pearls on a workers face. Through all of this their sweat bears beautiful fruits of love that feeds a family, community and ultimately the hands strength to go even further. Very good.

That is awesome, very well told.

I like your idea of the way a simple act of love in poverty can rise to the skies to become divine and the emergence of the bride in white confirms the transformation.Good poem.

I love your style. This poem has so much to offer the reader. What wonderful tribute to the hard worker! 10++

This is a lovely piece of work.

Very nice work here, i very much enjoyed it.

SO CUTE. I like this one.

the must important thing is that you r connected with the life - as we baked in our community and life there is the beat of your own keep up

ok, i just read your ph bio. so you write in one language and translate to english. i'm glad i don't have to try that. i would try to help you with english but it is more than i have time for now. besides, it would not be easy if i don't understand the meaning of the poem readily. :)