this poem is circular like the beginning could be put at the end and so on. that really creates the sense that its an ongoing problem with no obvious end. and the scars are lifelong too so we could look at this poem as the story a scar tells round and round as it fails to fade. lemons are good though. great write.
-M
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this poem is circular like the beginning could be put at the end and so on. that really creates the sense that its an ongoing problem with no obvious end. and the scars are lifelong too so we could look at this poem as the story a scar tells round and round as it fails to fade. lemons are good though. great write. -M