Monday, January 30, 2012

The Story Of Scars Comments

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Scars
Each a different story to tell
The attack of rabid dogs
The burn of the house of fire
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Aria Quimby
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Sandy Player 08 January 2013

this poem is circular like the beginning could be put at the end and so on. that really creates the sense that its an ongoing problem with no obvious end. and the scars are lifelong too so we could look at this poem as the story a scar tells round and round as it fails to fade. lemons are good though. great write. -M

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