Friday, August 26, 2016

The Story Of Life Comments

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Sometimes when life gets too much
Your body gets a rush but you
Can never have enough so when
Everything starts the crashing
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Laquory Jones
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Kelly Kurt 01 September 2016

Your poem reads as if it would be suited to a rap song. You have wonderful thoughts for such a young man. Keep working at your art

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