The Story Of Garlic And Onion Comments

wonderful written poem, i like the theme of a farm setting well penned Ellias

It's a good moral poem. I like you rhyming.

Love it, garlic and onion both are important as they were used for basic cooking here.....how cruel we to judge them by look, like onion, we can remove their old layers to have new silky new layer, as for garlic it can survive for long..if we have chance to plant it sure we will have healthy ones....so just look at human, if we give chance to them, we care, so they will be great person....nothing is worthless, everything come with value, i love the poem, great comparison_Unwritten Soul

Good comparison between the left behind onion and garlic which have a ripe smell and the conditions of many homeless and unwanted people. Understanding and love produces all. Good poem.