THE STORY OF BYZANTINE
EMPIRE
(667BC-1453AD)
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wish you didn't cram so many details or you could hv chosen a suitable stanzaic form each containing one historical fact...great research indeed...it will help the lazy like me to refresh without going bk to the texts, thnq, capt! *do continue the series...
Rajda, First, my congratulations to you on the arduous task of writing down the beautiful history of old. Second, you have managed a broad sweep of events regarding historical characters, dates, places, etc. in this long poem. Good. I have a suggestion here, if you don't mind.. If you break down the poem in to manageable stanzas, such as quatrains or at least eight-line verses, headed by stanza numbers (if you feel so) , then reading the same will be much easier, I feel. I'm looking forward to more Byzantine adventures..So, onward ho! ! Cheers. Subroto
Very interesting account of Greek history, written in simple, lucid English. Regarding Indira's comments, it is difficult to mould such informative concept into any stanzaic form.......... This is good.