The Story Of A King Comments

A strong narrative style...i visualized the scene...good culmination into a message! ! !

Nice story and moral narrated through the poem. Thank you.

The message is very familiar, but this story is quite novel and the way you have narrated it is quite absorbing! ! Chandra, you have many interesting things up your sleeve to entertain and educate your readers every time! !

A great poem, some people think they can do what they want in this world but like you say one day it will spring back.

What goes around does indeed come around. Love this poem Chandra, very inspired and a great read.

Wow a beautiful story but with strong message. I loved reading it.

amazing story with a brilliant imagery a profound poem outstanding work thanks for sharing