The Story Of A King: 02 - The Distant Beauty Comments

nsparent glamourous panes. The king could see all- none could see his mind or heart, nor whoelse there reigns. Sir great imagination your poem10+++++++

Royal was his robes, as much loyal were His men, nobody had a wish none there a complain as if pleasure rained away pain. Lovely poem shared 10++++++

Who can imagine things improper, that the state He rules fits for most beggars, in the Guineas Book? The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people. Nicely penned. 10++++

Like the distant hill Kings look blue. Round, symmetric, shapy, complete, ruff and tuff revered and full of hue. Yes the fake appearances of kings don't help. Nicly penned. 10++++

The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people. Like the distant hill Kings look blue. Round, symmetric, shapy, complete, ruff and tuff revered and full of hue. Yes the fake appearances of kings don't help. Nicly penned. 10++++

A king of a state should have his own senses, eyes and ears to see and hear the sufferings of his fellow people. But rarely do they have it. And nobody understands the dire reality that a king lives with. Who can imagine things improper, that the state He rules fits for most beggars, in the Guineas Book? A real time poem for people of Odisha. 10++++

Royal was his robes, as much loyal were His men, nobody had a wish none there a complain as if pleasure rained away pain. Lovely poem shared.

The king was shaved fair, clean and bright his looks. Who can imagine things improper, that the state He rules fits for most beggars, in the Guineas Book? The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people. Nicely penned. 10++++

Like the distant hill Kings look blue. Round, symmetric, shapy, complete, ruff and tuff revered and full of hue. Yes the fake appearances of kings don't help. Nicly penned. 10++++

Who can imagine things improper, that the state he rules fits for most beggars in the Guinese book.In every section of poetry your excellence is proved sir.Good one.