The Story Of A Girl Comments

This is the mindset of a fearful servant girl, so well expressed from her point of view.

Very sweet poem! How nice of the poet to empathise with Cinderella....like a real fairy godmother!

Oh no! The mistress is here, And I'm in fear. I need to hurry up or I won't get supper. fear, anxiety, cautiousness you express a lot of feelings and emotions here thank you very much. a nice poem

This one is so amazing. Have no words to describe it..! Thank you for sharing it with us.

nice try, ..... keep writing., .