The Story From Our Own Hearts Comments

Deep thoughts expressed creatively

Wow such an interesting poem. This thing called love can be sweet and at the same time be painful. I like

'I’ll live as dead ‘till the day I die and then I’m going to be with him for the rest of my life' And you're only 16? Now that's a looooong time... you will love many more times and remember to keep on writing all the while!

You write very well dear....keep it up!

I believe all poets should be exhausted but awake with intimacy. You're very revealing...you must be tired.

Anna, this is beautiful. I loved it. So true my angle.

This is a good poem, I liked it a lot, keep writing!

long but beautiful.. deserves a 10

excellent dear Anna..at your young age..quite marvelous having written this piece...a story and poem altogether...a love story and a great poem all in one..10+ for this love you young girl... .

Anna i don't know what to say but may i ask you how could you write this piece of gold? ... keep going pretty little girl....i give 10 remember your sister always loves you Hataw

You're an insightful young girl...so young with such intense emotion, writing from your heart. A perfect combination for a budding poet...When I started writing, I tended to ramble my words....be careful of rambling...condense your thoughts and words...but most of all, please keep writing. You do have the 'poetic magic' instilled within you! Great job!

i enjoy reading this poem i especially love this lines 'i want you to love me in the way I do and let destiny do what it has to do'.10++++. keep it up

very emotional.you're a great writer but take your time.don't write in a hurry.luv ya

Theme is really excellant. Expression is also nice. But you made it very narrative.You could have shorten it.Read and decide the basic focal point.

you keep the intensity going, nice...

wow this poem is amazing! ! you captured your entire point of view in a simple but yet complicated way that makes the reader connect with what you are saying

Oh love! oh love! oh love! ! ! ! Love is sweet when it come, Love is sweeter when it goes! Incredible! but it is true. That's why- our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought! yea- 10++++++++ for the heart-felt emissions

Explicit love poem, wish that love like this will last forever! A 10.

You have conveyed your innermost feelings. I like love poems and this one touched deep into my heart. A very nice poem. 10 for this. I will read more of your poems. Cheers. Pacific

A whole amazing experience seen through the wonderous eyes, , this is life anna, be happy and talk of love, , , , , :) flowers and rainbows too, , ,