Sunday, April 20, 2008

'The Story' Comments

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“The Story”

“The pain hit my heart so fierce”
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Ciara Gough
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Keith Hendrickson 16 September 2009

wow this poem is so similar to the comment i gave you on the first poem i read. i like the line when u say ''tick tock tick tock... i thought time was supposed to heal all wounds'' and then you follow that line up with '''days pass.... still wounded'' nice writing.

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Ciara Gough

Ciara Gough

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