So excellent. In few lilnes it certainl is a great summary of the story! HA! you are getting two comments from me!
Thank you my friend for rereading the poem. and I hope you have another good day! !
Thanks for the comment, really happy you like the poem. I wanted to bring words and music into the same piece. Have a great day!
Hello Carl, The pen tells a beautiful story, The ink splashes the emotional blood, The page is your generous world, The song is your heart's melody! Beautiful! 10+
And the heart is a lovely lovely poet who can sing as well, a beautiful write.
Thanks for the kind words. I do play music, but you would not want to hear me sing. Better for me to use a pen and not a microphone (lol) . Have a good day.
The world is page and life is a book. Writing gives amazing expression that comes out from brilliant thought. Pen definitely tells interesting story and this is wisely shared poem...10
Thanks for taking the time to read this poem, and the kind words. Have a good day.
Succinctness at its best! Absolutely marvelous poem, Carl!
deep words from the heart and soul feeling like the deep comes true heart bresk
Thanks for taking the time to read this poem. At times a poem or lyric can do a better job of expressing a feeling than tripping over words when talking.
Thanks for the comment and I am happy you liked the piece. Since I started writing in '85, I have found it easier and more truthful to express myself through writing poems and lyrics; so at times the ink does feel like it is a part of me.
A four liner poem with great impact. Beautifully crafted.
Beautiful brevity! A gorgeous Tribute. Enjoyed enormously your deepest thought, finest BIO I have read, thank you for sharing your soul, Carl.5 Stars Full.