Saturday, July 4, 2015

The Story Comments

Rating: ★4.0

Story teller:

just hours after being hired
He got fired
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julius lenjatin
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Allotey Abossey 27 July 2015

Excellent display of wits and thoughts. Good work my friend

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Kinyua Karanja 07 July 2015

I like the way you address the issues in our society. The rottenness of our social morals and corruption at different levels. Keep it there.

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Abdalla Juma Shenga 05 July 2015

a nice piece. my favorite is the last verse

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Julius Lenjatin 06 July 2015

Thank you

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Shakil Ahmed 04 July 2015

beautiful poem with different thought.

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Julius Lenjatin 06 July 2015

thanks

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Julius Lenjatin 06 July 2015

Thank you, for this comment

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