Friday, August 16, 2013

The Stormy Shore! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The angry storm comes along
With the tides of high and low.
So angry to engulf anyone
Who ever crosses his ways.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Uma Ram 21 April 2015

In fact shore is just silent like our mind Our thoughts brings storms of anger, hatred, revenge jealousy This itself take away our peace. The only reason is When all are sitting on shore Why storm hit few while others remain cool to it? Beautiful lines mam. thanks for sharing. Mam I invite you to read my latest poem Awaiting Miracles...Thank you mam

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Akhtar Jawad 07 April 2015

In fact shore is just silent like our mind Our thoughts brings storms of anger, hatred, revenge jealousy A wonderful study of human psychology, a great metaphoric poem.................10

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Valerie Dohren 18 August 2013

A superb metaphorical poem - great read.

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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2013

this could also be a metaphor of life as it is much like the sea. well written Geetha enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2013

this could also be a metaphor of life as it is much like the sea. well written Geetha enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2013

this could also be a metaphor of life as it is much like the sea. well written Geetha enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2013

this could also be a metaphor of life as it is much like the sea. well written Geetha enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2013

this could also be a metaphor of life as it is much like the sea. well written Geetha enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2013

this could also be a metaphor of life as it is much like the sea. well written Geetha enjoyed

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Yasmin Khan 17 August 2013

A great message in symbols of the sea and waves, always been a fascination with poets and writers, I liked your poem written in the shape of waves coming in, going out.

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Dave Walker 16 August 2013

A great poem, some hate takes a little longer to wash away, but if the world worked together the storm could blow it all away.

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