Wednesday, February 2, 2005

The Stormy Sea Comments

Rating: 2.2

The waves are twisting and turning
Churning and werling
The little boat sways from side to side
And all the fish, have gone to hide
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Jamie Parker
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Edgar 15 January 2020

Very bad poem I don’t like it at all 0/10

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Sean De Montfort 15 October 2005

Better structure and it was good even without rhyme but could be better

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Theodora Onken 04 February 2005

Let me guess, you are the brave sailor? Theodora Onken

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