Tuesday, December 12, 2006

The Storms Have Passed Comments

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the days are getting cloudy for me,
storm clouds over my head,
so dark, i can barely see,
the storms have passed by me.
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jim foulk
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Manonton Dalan 26 January 2016

he probably meant it... peace to you

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Not a member No 4 16 March 2007

Hey, there may be corners to turn yet jim, and surprises to encounter in peaceful weather. An Indian summer might come and change your mind. But, for all that, I understand this line of thought only too well. Nevertheless, sometimes I hope. The image of the storm is very powerful and meaningful, as is the fading of the light, in line 3 of verse 1 - which reminds me of the song 'Not dark Yet' by Dylan (about your age - maybe a wee bit older) which he wrote just a few years ago. Another good write jim. Keep them coming. jim

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