The Storm-2 Comments

Visited again today… to this exquisite class poetry

Everything revolves around the drunken sky, the hub. Your one line, ' Nothing leaves without leaving a throb' adds niceties to the corpus of this poem...appreciated!

6) and congratulations, Nosheen. The poem is already among the "Best Poems of Members"…¿

5) " Nothing leaves without leaving a throb Be it storm or be it love! "… I have written about these lines already. What more? ! ,

4) the choice of words, phrases and metaphors! "A smash answers the winds call", " Splinters of a tired window at the feet" simply great! And the image of "a drunk sky"….

But, she can do nothing to stop me from adding the poem to MyFavourites.

I wanted to give five stars here. But Nosheen has said "No! " But she can b

Exquisite poetry. Truly Nosheenic. The closing lines stopped my heart! well, almost..

A beautiful poem, Nosheen. Well done!

A galaxy of stars for this poem!

Nothing leaves without leaving a throb Be it storm or be it love!

The sky is drunk on something Fermented long enough in some cellar

Wow! ! ! Your poem is so beautiful; it makes me spellbound!

Nosheen very Beautifully put Encore! ! ! ! !

The last two lines are so beautiful. Such a wonderful poem. Loved it. Thanks.