Wednesday, October 19, 2005

The Storm Comments

Rating: 4.9

Blue hills, along the horizon hugging,
Like a mountain range in mist,
Lightning flashing, thunder crashing,
Part of God's almighty fist.
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Ernestine Northover
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Duncan Wyllie 09 May 2006

Brilliant! ! ! ! just Brillliant! ! ! Love Duncan

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Bill Mitton 11 January 2006

Ernestine, again this is very good indeed short but oh so evocative. brilliant! Bill M

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Simon Whild 30 October 2005

Beautiful. It reminds me a lot of one of my father's watercolours. Enough said.

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Uriah Hamilton 20 October 2005

A poem with a lovely flow despite the stormy content, and I dug the bird ending.

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