Monday, July 2, 2007

The Storm, The Rapist And The Getaway Comments

Rating: 5.0

Torrid raindrops fall outside my window pane
The sound of the thunder slowly drives me insane

The moonlight stretches across the sky
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Meggie Gultiano 18 July 2007

Our life is in the hands of the Almighty. We dont know His plans for us.This is a very emotional one, the pain just seeping inside my broken heart. A marvelous piece, and a must for evryone to read. Wonderful, David..you are a great poet, and i salute you for this.Thanks for sharing!

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Edna Javelosa 02 July 2007

ohhh this is too sad a poem..i could picture everything that happened then..great write..

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