Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Saturday, October 29, 2011

The Storm Defeats Comments

Rating: 4.3

Why did the storm blow away my soul,
that all my tears fell upon the evil soil,
in such that every thought in my heart digs all moments prior to the storm,
yet as I move on my heart bleeds for the hands to be turned back way before the gliding dome,
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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 14 June 2012

A reflecting pice. The poetics of your pen is truly reflecting. Great poetry, bro.

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Tasha Scott 05 November 2011

that is good as well my friend! ! ! you are very skilled! ! ! !

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Jacqui Broad 02 November 2011

Yes, my friend, the pain is definately still boiling in the poetics of your pen... You've penned it down well, though. But there's always a rainbow after the storm, yes?

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Olayemi Ayo 01 November 2011

Poem is an inspirational touch, which touches life and society. Please the poetic inspiration burning.

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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