When the storm comes around
Taking those who have no one to hold
I was lonely and scared
The storm thought I deserved
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It's so lovely to read and you wrote it sincerely excellent :)
poignant words...the last line reads sad but poetically it is deep and absorbing...good piece...10
very nice poem, nicely written. i hope storm won't be tat bad as a home: -)
This is a very touching poem, Whispering Rose. You're Well-chosen words paint lasting, poignant images. Very nice indeed.