Friday, March 5, 2010

The Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the storm comes around
Taking those who have no one to hold
I was lonely and scared
The storm thought I deserved
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Whispering Rose
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Bert Bell 11 October 2010

This is a very touching poem, Whispering Rose. You're Well-chosen words paint lasting, poignant images. Very nice indeed.

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Wildan F Rabbani 30 June 2010

It's so lovely to read and you wrote it sincerely excellent :)

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Kesav Easwaran 21 May 2010

poignant words...the last line reads sad but poetically it is deep and absorbing...good piece...10

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very nice poem, nicely written. i hope storm won't be tat bad as a home: -)

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