Saturday, August 1, 2009

The Storm Comments

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I just love standing here in the rain,
In the middle of this quiet plain,
Thinking of nothing,
That's What I'm loving,
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Lacey Peter
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Ted M 01 August 2009

Great message. The storm gets stronger unexpectedly and the going gets tough. That's the test of courage. When the going gets tough, the Tough get going. Nice write. quite emotional.

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Catrina Heart 01 August 2009

great rhymes here...fine diction...a fine ending with a query...well done! ! ! Thanks! ! !

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