Thursday, March 22, 2007

The Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nature’s beauty flashed
Lighting the sky with ribbons of pure white
Seconds passed and the earth rumbled
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Patricia Gale
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Nimal Dunuhinga 17 July 2009

Times and storms very memorable along this journey and this whispers of the milestones. Indeed a very great poem.

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Robert Howard 24 March 2007

Great metaphor applied with grace and insight.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 23 March 2007

Pass, yes... but never from our hearts... lovely write

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Duncan Wyllie 22 March 2007

Wonderful words of wisdom, enjoy life today, live your story, this is just brilliant Patricia but then...that's you all over Love duncan X

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lOTS OF VERVE, AND VIVID IMAGERY SPARKLE THIS WORK WITH SPLENDOR... F.J.R.

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Original Unknown Girl 22 March 2007

Storms are my favourite type of weather, just for the sheer intensity and the after-effects, nothing quite like it to shake things up. You've written here with heartfelt words of an experience that has moved you deeply. I'm loving this poem, most tender. HG: -) xx

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