Nature’s beauty flashed
Lighting the sky with ribbons of pure white
Seconds passed and the earth rumbled
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Wonderful words of wisdom, enjoy life today, live your story, this is just brilliant Patricia but then...that's you all over Love duncan X
lOTS OF VERVE, AND VIVID IMAGERY SPARKLE THIS WORK WITH SPLENDOR... F.J.R.
Storms are my favourite type of weather, just for the sheer intensity and the after-effects, nothing quite like it to shake things up. You've written here with heartfelt words of an experience that has moved you deeply. I'm loving this poem, most tender. HG: -) xx
Times and storms very memorable along this journey and this whispers of the milestones. Indeed a very great poem.