Monday, March 17, 2008

The Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lightning flashes bright outside
Right now I feel I've lost my mind
I see the rain fall quickly down
I see it and I want to drown
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MCKENZi : ] 17 March 2008

shew! i'm so...speechless. this poem is great - like all your others. all you're poems are so deep. good work! ! : ]

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Vallerie Lobell 17 March 2008

intense wording and images... enjoyed it all...welcome to PH and best wishes...Vallerie

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Shaun William Hayes 17 March 2008

Time heals, it really does, and writing it all down, good work again. Shaun.

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