Sunday, December 10, 2017

The Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

The storm strike a blister on the roof's top
Crackling-clang with a loud shot
Tree's loosing it fastening knot
Leaves falling from crops
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Abdul Basit Ismail
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Chinedu Dike 22 January 2020

An insightful portrayal of the devastating effects of a storm written with conviction. A sad story that really touches the hearts of readers. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2017

wastes sites sprays the environment, a smelling rot The sudden silence reveal the mob Mentioning the long lasted frightening scene. such a nice and grear description of the theme..... thank you dear poet. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 December 2017

Abdul, such a goos write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Abdul Basit 14 December 2017

thanks a lot

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 December 2017

Andul, such a good write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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