The Stone -04 Comments

It a great poem about the born of human.And it's a great thought of self protection.Thanks for sharing this poem 10+++++

A wonderful way for the emergence of the human species, so beautifully narrated. I clearly remember stone 1,2,3 poems penned by you. I liked the way you gave an artistic touch to the human kind - the aesthetics which makes all the difference! A pleasure to read, Subhas li.

awesome.....the form and the content both have the power to give a shake to my heart if it is alive... thanks for sharing.... no doubt and delay to 10+++.

A beautiful approach and nice presentation.10 By the way, many thanks for your comment on my poem 'A Bird Named Desire'. The reply section of the poem reads- 'You cannot send duplicate comments' although no comments have been sent earlier.

The emergence of a species New and dynamic Weak but artistic Slow yet thoughtful Without horns and hoofs, Without nails and large teeth, Without wings and long beaks, Without venom or a stinger, Still it won, Wow a new class of poem, describing history of mankind so nicely. 10++ for this lovely one, and thanks for sharing it.

Without horns and hoofs, Without nails and large teeth, Without wings and long beaks, Without venom or a stinger, Still it won, invaded, and Tamed one and all around Without a war. Beautifully written. A great anthropological epic being introduced? Continue this series please at least for our world of scientific thinkers and lovers of Nature. Thanks for the sharing.10++ for this lovely poem.

Cute narration on how we cane into existence and how long we retain it, ofcourse matters, thanks for the share poet

Still it won, invaded, and Tamed one and all around Without a war. A new era dawned. Humans were born. A very beautiful description of Anthropologic History of primordial man. 10 for this nice poem. Each Science student would now love to read poems. Thanks.