The Stone -04 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra
The Stone -04
Then there was
The emergence of a species
New and dynamic
Weak but artistic
Slow yet thoughtful
Without horns and hoofs,
Without nails and large teeth,
Without wings and long beaks,
Without venom or a stinger,
Still it won, invaded, and
Tamed oneand all around
Without a war.
A new era dawned.
Humans were born.
It a great poem about the born of human.And it's a great thought of self protection.Thanks for sharing this poem 10+++++
A wonderful way for the emergence of the human species, so beautifully narrated. I clearly remember stone 1,2,3 poems penned by you. I liked the way you gave an artistic touch to the human kind - the aesthetics which makes all the difference! A pleasure to read, Subhas li.
awesome.....the form and the content both have the power to give a shake to my heart if it is alive... thanks for sharing.... no doubt and delay to 10+++.
Thank you dear Huda ji for your kind visit, patient reading and highly inspiring comments. I feel grateful to you. Regards. Subhas
A beautiful approach and nice presentation.10 By the way, many thanks for your comment on my poem 'A Bird Named Desire'. The reply section of the poem reads- 'You cannot send duplicate comments' although no comments have been sent earlier.
Thanks dear poet for the warm comments. I owe my gratitude to you. There is a bug in this site, Poemhunter.. sometimes it does not allow to render your comments -in spite of my repeated efforts that day to send my comment on your poem A bird named desire, each time it made me desperate by saying You can not send duplicate comments. I will try it again. May be Iwould be lucky sometime again. Thanks. Subhas
The emergence of a species New and dynamic Weak but artistic Slow yet thoughtful Without horns and hoofs, Without nails and large teeth, Without wings and long beaks, Without venom or a stinger, Still it won, Wow a new class of poem, describing history of mankind so nicely. 10++ for this lovely one, and thanks for sharing it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Still it won, invaded, and Tamed one and all around Without a war. A new era dawned. Humans were born. A very beautiful description of Anthropologic History of primordial man. 10 for this nice poem. Each Science student would now love to read poems. Thanks.
Thanks my dear Rimi...Thanks for the love and the concern for my poems.