The Stone- 03 Comments

I was the shore for the Waves of the sea of events To dash upon me In the ages to follow. 10++++ for the timeless creation, Sir.

There was a spark of lust In the fish eyed Nature. Creations, procreations Went on and on. Beautiful line. Loved it, Now I feel interested in Science, the subject I hated so much in my early childhood. Thanks for bringing me back to the track. 10+ for this poem shared.

There was a spark of lust In the fish eyed Nature. Creations, procreations Went on and on. I regained my sense only To watch densest of forests Over crowding me and Flocks of Birds and Animals Dwelling, feasting and Partying on my lap. Feels like a video recorder was placed some where during those primordial das.. I know I understand poetry too less.. but I am thrilled at reading it..If it is poetry, then people can consider me to be a lover of poetry. Do n't know why I am drawn attracted to this kind of poems.. Thanks Subhas, However for keeping it up, Subhas. Gratefully yours, Neetu.

I am, indeed, so thrilled to read the story of a stone so beautifully penned. Just cannot leave the page without another full vote.

Spontaneous flow of thoughts, to record the birth of life and beings created by the omniscient, omnipresent, omnipotent thanks dear poet

Then there were the streams Emerging out of me, Feeding the rivers Piercing through my heart Carrying messages of life Through those inert and dumb Valleys of silence, And Timeless existence. Highly impressive line....10 for this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it.