The Stone -01 Comments

Each in its turn forced me Split into a state of Smaller dimension But greater mobility. Lovely poem shared on this theme. 10+++ for sharing.

I was born Out of vigorous melting Followed by A very slow cooling In those igneous moments. Beginning of a nice story, the story of Earth. Beautigul.10marks.

Now it was the moment To roll down and stroll ahead Albeit away from home and My known, safe homeland For an unknown future. A very nice poem on matter and its evolution. Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.10 for it.

I was born large A large body, A larger mass, But a little mind And a much narrower heart Albeit little did I know Of conflicts, collisions and About wars, confrontations Nor of collaborations. Marvelous description...I would love to read the whole series if you keep it up Subhas. Please..Thanks for such a lovely breed of poem. Neetu

Subhas ji, What a wonderful poem and the beautiful thoughts that flows with it. A full 10 for you Sir!

We are formed by various confrontation, collaboration, collision, millennia of moments passed, speaks volume, thanks dear poet, i read and enjoyed ur series of the stone, thanks

I was born large A large body, A larger mass, But a little mind And a much narrower heart Albeit little did I know Of conflicts, collisions and About wars, confrontations Beautiful expression on the process of evolution. Thanks for sharing.

The forces of the nature shapes everything! How powerful is nature.