Two decades of bliss they had
The honey jar was sweet not to be spared
She was young and naive but the honey was irresistible
Before God and man they stood
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It appears like a fairytale - a rare kind of love, devotion, and commitment. Beautiful narrative poem with rendition of words to utmost justice. Thanks for sharing Rose and do remain blessed.
very touching and with sweetness of Honey, thank you for sharing! 10++
The poem is simply beautiful, it has been written in such a manner that it immediately touches the hearts.
People should stop stealing honey otherwise we shall ask for bees to sting them....a good piece of matrimonial bliss
Wow, mine is coming soon, he he he, and you will eat like hogs too. Good job
A twist of cohabiting and marriage, the approval that she is a fine wife brings the message clear.Well written
Hehehehe the stolen honey it was sure irresistible but the great message here is A fine wife she is
You brought out the typical African lovely wedding We danced to our youthful bones Like hogs we ate We spared no left overs This was our day too Aloud we spoke blessings In whispers we gossiped about the two decades stolen honey We showered them with gifts
Like hogs we ate We spared no left overs This was our day too Aloud we spoke blessings In whispers we gossiped about the two decades stolen honey Beautifully written. Lovely poem. Thanks for the sharing.10 marks. Subhas
…….irresistible honey jah