Saturday, August 13, 2016

The Stolen Honey. Comments

Rating: 4.9

Two decades of bliss they had
The honey jar was sweet not to be spared
She was young and naive but the honey was irresistible
Before God and man they stood
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Rose Kanana
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symon 02 April 2020

…….irresistible honey jah

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Chinedu Dike 19 January 2017

It appears like a fairytale - a rare kind of love, devotion, and commitment. Beautiful narrative poem with rendition of words to utmost justice. Thanks for sharing Rose and do remain blessed.

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Siddartha Montik 05 December 2016

very touching and with sweetness of Honey, thank you for sharing! 10++

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Akhtar Jawad 08 November 2016

The poem is simply beautiful, it has been written in such a manner that it immediately touches the hearts.

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Karen Kerubo 06 November 2016

People should stop stealing honey otherwise we shall ask for bees to sting them....a good piece of matrimonial bliss

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Eliza Mwendwa 31 October 2016

Wow, mine is coming soon, he he he, and you will eat like hogs too. Good job

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Ruth Nyokabi 10 September 2016

A twist of cohabiting and marriage, the approval that she is a fine wife brings the message clear.Well written

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James Mwenda 06 September 2016

Hehehehe the stolen honey it was sure irresistible but the great message here is A fine wife she is

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Charity Karimi 24 August 2016

The perfect picture of a bride.What a love and amazing.

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Collins Waswa 23 August 2016

You brought out the typical African lovely wedding We danced to our youthful bones Like hogs we ate We spared no left overs This was our day too Aloud we spoke blessings In whispers we gossiped about the two decades stolen honey We showered them with gifts

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 August 2016

Two lovebirds were joined! Thanks for sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 August 2016

Like hogs we ate We spared no left overs This was our day too Aloud we spoke blessings In whispers we gossiped about the two decades stolen honey Beautifully written. Lovely poem. Thanks for the sharing.10 marks. Subhas

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Rose Kanana 14 August 2016

Thanks Chakra.

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Charity Karimi 13 August 2016

Interesting way of expressing stolen honey Rose :)

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