Friday, September 13, 2019

The Stoic Child Comments

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He made the choice to steel himself
Against the pain
Not to let his parents break him
He thought that he could make them
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louis rams 14 September 2019

when your life is hung by a thread, then it's time to tell the police instead

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Practicing Poetess 14 September 2019

Perhaps he was too young to know that he could phone the police. Or maybe he didn't know how. Or he could have been intimidated into silence. A great deal of possibilities here. Thanks for reading and commenting, Louis! : -)

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Kostas Lagos 14 September 2019

Sad poem. Really sad.But it has such beauty between its lines!

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Practicing Poetess 14 September 2019

Thank you, Kostas, for having eyes to see beauty in the most unexpected places! : -)

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 September 2019

But, little did he know He only sealed his fate. 'Nothing fazes him' they said, So they beat him worse, poor kid! . very fine poem with insightful thoughts. tony

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Practicing Poetess 14 September 2019

Very sad poem- - But, life isn't always pretty. And reality-based poetry isn't always pretty, either. Thank you for reading and commenting, Dr. Tony!

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