Monday, May 2, 2022

The Stirring Of This Lifeless Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a stone-cold fire in the warm fireplace
Forever reminding me of my resting place
Eternal flames burning a hole in my soul
Breathing new life into my existing role
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Richard Wlodarski
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 May 2022

Typo: I liked these two lines: Anger fear sadness grief sorrow...be aware/ Remnants of ghosts strewn along the road of despair

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 May 2022

Honestly speaking, this is an excellent poem. I liked these two line most, 'Anger fear sadness grief sorrow...be aware/Remnants of ghosts strewn along the road of despair. I have already rated this poem with 5 stars and taken it to my favorite!

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Dillip, I am humbled and honoured in you believing this to be an excellent poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 May 2022

Dillip, thank you so much for adding this song poem to your favourites. It's one of my favourites. And I sincerely believe that it can make a great song!

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