Sunday, March 22, 2009

The Still Coincidence Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I had to describe his temptation,
words alone would withdraw to this creation.
I've never seen his eyes before
and still, a coincidence.
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Maya Hershey
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Mystic Indian 17 August 2009

a beautiful 'human moment' captured by a beautiful young mind. hats off Maya.10/10 and u get my vote too.

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Afzal Shauq 25 June 2009

I've never touched his skin as more as I think, still a coincidence. I've never kissed his lips or wondering..... still a coincidence. hey poet of roamnce... its really a heartfelt stanza of your swee poem.. flow is poetic and melodious and the words are put at the exct place and acording to the need of nature of poem..idea is thoughtful and rich..meaningful poem... best one..10+++++++++

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