Sunday, June 17, 2018

The Step Stone Of Love Cries Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tsunami struck and has devastated all.
I was sitting on the tread of a step stone.
The wind on the bay was sweet and mild.
The Rabana-mustache (grass)was on the feet nearby.
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 June 2018

Pallab, such a well crafted poem....10++++

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Pallab Chaudhury 21 June 2018

Thank you for the very positive feedback. With regards.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 June 2018

You have so nicely and touchingly inscribed this poem on Tsunami - 2004. Each and every line is moving. I quote.. .The wind on the bay was sweet and mild. The Rabana Mustache (grass) was my feet nearby. ........ ............. ......... ......... The tsunami came following a hidden path And struck on the step stone As if a glass wall to crumble! Beautiful poem.10

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Pallab Chaudhury 21 June 2018

Nice to receive a comment from you. Thank you for the very positive feedback. With best wishes and regards.

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