The Steampunk Heart Comments

Through wormholes of war, I delve in sorrow. Power grinds gears; cogs mesh with savagery. In camps of death, I measure mass murder and know human spirit and dignity......much impressive lines on war. Touching expression. This is really A great poem I appreciate it.10

The war and bloodshed are too depressing and one gets deeply scarred at heart witnessing the violence around. The heart grieves and it is about to break and collapse. There are so many medical terms here related to the heart which are alien to me. As a result, the true substance of the poem fails to be comprehended by my small brain! However, I know it is a powerful write expressing deep feelings of agitation and pain! A sure 10

A magnificent poem, dear Ma'am Simone.....10++++++++++++