Saturday, March 25, 2017

The Stealer Of My Soul Comments

Rating: 4.8

She was smart, way too pretty
the kind of girl I'd never get.
should've known that she would leave me
should've known I wouldnt forget!
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buried alive
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Mihaela Pirjol 26 March 2017

'' you'd better love, before you die but don't hang on or wonder why! '' This could be a perfect refrain to this perfect song you just wrote! There is musicality within these verses; there is passion; there is love: there is Fire! That is what you need to set the hearts on fire! Imagine a guitar....

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Daniel Jones 25 March 2017

i felt like i was reading my own thoughts, the love that escapes and takes a part of you with them, the person you were, everything you gave them, Loved reading this! they all get our souls!

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