Wednesday, June 20, 2018

The Stay Order Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wanted to leave Islamabad and go back to Karachi,
my grandson was insisting me to stay here till his birthday,
I suggested a balloting on the issue.
I wrote on a piece of paper,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 June 2018

A marvelous poem that shows how important a family is. Akhtar Jawad is a superb family man. Very heartwarming and unique write. Enjoyed reading it.10++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 June 2018

once i too faced a similar situation we stayed till our grandaughter's b'day and she said '' this was the best present on her b'day today she was happy so were we

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Red Soul 20 June 2018

Aren't children the sweetest of them all ? I really loved this beautiful poem Mr Jawad. Have a wonderful time with your grandchildren sir: -) Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2018

A grandfather obeying stay order given by grandson is definitely interesting. Grandchildren love their grandfather very much and they do not want to leave at all. They have deep affection for grandpa. Wonderful poem is well expressed...10

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Kelly Kurt 20 June 2018

Enjoy the rest of your stay.

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