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So I didnt understand all the randomly put words at the end that seemed to untalented to type..I did like the poem and good job with the simple rhyme scheme. It also looks very good and neat and orderly because of the similarities between the paragraphs. If anyone likes this poem they should read the story from the Bible. Its in the book of Daniel, in the second chapter. Its a good story and this was a good poem.

A vivid vision vividly written about. Concise and up to the mark

A great poem with a wonderful flow. A joy to read!

I like the lines I love the rhymes. Precision that entice Makes it too short It is amazing...

The nature of anyone and anything believed to be grand but crumbles at weak foundations.. much truth and insight :)

Your use of biblical accounts and morals never ceases to amaze me. Your descriptive writing not only intrigues others to look back on the original source but also relates biblical accounts to world events and ideas. Never stop writing.

the tower of Pisa in Italy, built on the soft ground, that's why it is leaning, but you are singing about a statue on the unfavorable foundations! an interesting piece of work!

I adore statues so could not resist this piece by the title... im glad i did as although statues seem to be a subject poets write about this is beautifully penned and dare i say it stands taller than other pieces i have read on the same subject...I love the final lines which suggest it was made by nature.....tyvm karen