Tuesday, January 8, 2013

The Station Turns Comments

Rating: 5.0

An almost solitary station,
two or three stray dogs
coil to get sudden peeping
ray of the sun.
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Neela Nath Das
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Valsa George 11 January 2013

Such desolate lives, we come across many a time in life, especially at the railway stations! The young mother abandoned after being used with her child evokes pity in us and and the pain we experience is intensified at the thought that she is dumb. A touching poem on an innocent victim of the cruel society! !

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Hans Vr 10 January 2013

Only a true poet can make such an amazing observation filled with feelings. What is more, you describe the situation so lively with only the right words. I think this is a superb piece of poetry. Fantastic.!

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Vivek Tiwari 10 January 2013

A pathetic story that we witness oftener. Its the unique attempt of a great poetic work that you did rightly. A moving poem. 10

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Heather Wilson 10 January 2013

A story of real life for many, far above sad, a well written piece.

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Valerie Dohren 09 January 2013

A very poignant story, there must be many like it.

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Vikrant Jog 08 January 2013

Great work Sir... Thought is new and still it turns solitary...

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