Friday, June 28, 2019

The Station Road Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the hour of deepening twilight
At road beside by train stop
Biding my time waiting for a bus
I saw how busy many folks around.
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H.Chandrasena De Silva
COMMENTS
Jayatissa K.Liyanage 29 June 2019

A candid description of a real life situation, viewing through a sensible and humane eye. Lovely presentation. Thanks for sharing an inspiring poem. X

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Your views are really encouraging thanks.

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 June 2019

Very impressive write, H. Chandrasena. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Thanks for the positive comments.I red your poems which shows chain of thoughts.You have unlimited Ideas about what you write but try to polish it bit more.Hope you will improve it further by making it short and sweet.Overall good presentation.

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