Thursday, November 27, 2008

The Station Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wandering aimlessly at the misty station
Lugging a velvet heart-shaped case
Listening numbly to the conductor's whistle
Trudging past endless grey with dreary pace
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Josephine J.W
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COMMENTS
Fiona Davidson 07 December 2008

Lovely atmospherics in this one Josephine...well written...thank you

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Lena A. 28 November 2008

i feel for this man...

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Ian Bowen 27 November 2008

Josephine, enjoyed this piece as there is an atmosphere to it.10/10 Ian

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Larry Stevens 27 November 2008

cloudy train station grey seeps in to those who dare tread over stone and through a blanket not snug

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