Thursday, November 17, 2016

The State Of My Tomb Comments

Rating: 5.0

The state of my tomb is always empty
if you look even closely i am never there
though i died once i never stayed dead
the tomb of my pain is empty
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Chukwuma Adione
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Obigod Chidi Cece 01 September 2017

This your poem is so profound. Only those who belong there can get it.

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Amaka Topaz 25 November 2016

This poem is well thought out, It tells a lot. When they say a poem speaks, I refer to 'The state of my tomb'

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Marieta Maglas 17 November 2016

once i woke up i remain alive from age to age no tomb can keep me in. - I like the ending- voted 10

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Chukwuma Adione 18 November 2016

thank you Marieta Maglas...

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