Wednesday, July 4, 2012

The State Of My Soul Comments

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My limbs turned against me
Gave witness of my evil deeds
The heart and mind rebelled
The tongue lashed me out
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Abdul Wahab
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 July 2012

Thought provoking poem..Well written..10 marks

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Rajendran Muthiah 04 July 2012

Friends throng around any man for the cause of seeking pleasure will be leaving him in the lurch once surfeited. Good theme and content.

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