Friday, December 28, 2012

The Start Of A New Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Right before dawn the atmosphere shifts.
My senses heightened with anticipation.
I've waited patiently for this day to arrive.
The start of a new day.
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Jeanette Telusma
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Edward Kofi Louis 11 August 2017

A new day! A new life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jeanette Telusma 11 August 2017

Yes... and thank you for commenting.

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 July 2017

Hi Jeanette, Beautiful poem exuding abundant happiness and confidence. Exquisite vocabulary makes it ingenious: a new day has come. No longer able to hide under the covers. The barriers have risen up to let the sun through. It's time for the start of a new day. As I stand and witness transformation in the air, I'm filled with great joy, peace and aspiration. Wonderful write. a matter of joy to read through.: : : Confidence is now my middle name: : True! Jeanette Confidence Telusma. A mighty 100 for the confidence...

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Jeanette Telusma 17 July 2017

Sir Unnikrishnan, I am grateful for all that you do here on PH and in life overall. Your kindness, labor of love and good will to man kind are always appreciated by myself and countless others I imagine. Stay blessed always.

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